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Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the service of Shopping trip to Boulogne and Hypermarket.
Firstly, when I went to buy some milk and craker at 9.30 pm in the hypermarket,it has crowded, and long queues at chekouts.I paid my product and there was a mistake on the price and went to talk with the boss but he didn't give me an answer. it took me a lot time and I missed my taxi and got home at 11.30 pm!.
Furthermore,the coach took 1 hour arrive at Boulogne the air-conditioning wasn`t working and into of it was very hot as well there weren't cold drinks I fed up with all this.
when I got there to Boulogne at the restaurants was closed and anybody gave me an explanation and I had paid $50 for have lunch in another place.
Finally,I want to pay back all my money and never come back the Brighton Marina Coaches.
faithfully
Paula Monsalve
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